One for her

Crumbling legs

Aching back

Eyes bleary

Tired soul

Here she comes

Flicking her hair

Looking happy

On the whole

Finding her

Is a dream come true

She’s meeting me

Dressed all in blue

How do I look

She says with a smile

I look at her

Eyes hooked for a while

All day long

She works like a slave

Yet here she is

Man, isn’t she brave

She steps right in

And hugs me tight

I lift her up

Yet feel so light… πŸ™‚

Sundaram Chauhan

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  1. It is beautiful, I liked reading it.πŸ’œπŸ’«
    And ykw, when u read it for the first time I misread the first word in the last line as you*
    So it sounded like..
    I lift her up, you feel so light. It seemed like an irony to me.
    And I was literally smiling. πŸ˜ƒ
    And the lines where you say..
    How do I look, she asks with a smile , I look at her, eyes hooked for a while!
    It had me there, man!!🀐😍

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    • With you it always feels like a discussion over a cup of tea. In that line, to tell you the truth, she did feel light 😁…but it was more the lightness the lifting process brought to my heart that overflowed in me, and I wrote the words.
      And I love it that you liked the “eyes hooked” lines. There was so much to say but only a few words at my disposal. I hope all my wonder, respect, sheer gratitude could be conveyed. Thanks for reading Chetna. πŸ™πŸ€˜πŸ™…☺️

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  2. Ohh! It’s great to have this virtual tea and a real convo.πŸ˜‚
    Then, either of you must be going to gym.πŸ˜›
    I could feel your admiring her through your lines. That’s what a good writer make us do.πŸ˜‚
    Yeah! I have received it and kept safe in my heart.πŸ’œ
    Always a pleasure to be here, sir.πŸ˜ŽπŸ™ŒπŸ’«

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    • Oh! I got it correct that means.πŸ˜…πŸ˜…
      Sounds great. Yoga makes us healthy but for that I am quite lazy.πŸ™ƒπŸ˜…
      Nice that you do, btw.

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      • Ohh man! You are too sweet with your words. I am flatteredπŸ˜…πŸ˜…
        You too.
        When are you gonna post yr story btw?

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      • My stories take time, much to my own annoyance. But i have something shorter in mind that I might post before that. But if want I will suggest you the story “let’s catch up” Thanks for this interest Chetna, and you deserve sweet words. Keep inspired.

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      • I wonder how do you hold on with your patience! It takes a world.🀐
        I have already read your two stories.. the bride and one you r talking about. I will leave my feedback soon.πŸ˜… you know it takes time naa! πŸ™ƒ
        It needs one to know one.😜 Thanks Sundaram.

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      • Hahaa..awesome…you blow my mind everytime…where were you hidden till date? I will wait for your review Chetna…something to look forward to. And patience aajaati h jab story dimag me aati h. Justice toh karna h na.πŸ˜€πŸ˜€

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      • I was just looking for someone like you.πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
        Glad you found my blog and followed coz that’s how I caught up with you.
        I can relate to this. While writing, the thought of the story makes us live into the scenes as well. And the thought of completing excites.😍 I too have tried once. πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

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  3. Lovely😊❀ post…. With reading each line, I could imagine the scene going on in front of me… I feel like I saw it by my own eyesπŸ€­β€¦ …
    Thank you🌹 for adding up to my imagination
    Keep writing😊
    Keep sharingπŸ‘­πŸ€—

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    • Thanks so much Joey…πŸ™ Really appreciate you thinking of me for this honour. I loved reading your answers. And I agree that writing is important, doesn’t matter what it’s about. Wish you the best for your book. I hope you come out with soon.πŸ€œπŸ€›

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