I know I know
You dance so well
You move like a dream
And cast your spell
I know my love
You don’t need to tell
You do look good
And I love how you smell
Wanna hear some more?
Wanna hear me yell?
You’re the best of ’em all
You’re gonna excel
Now enough for the day
‘Cause I feel like hell
Lemme drop you home
Lemme go to my shell
© Sundaram Chauhan
Beautiful 😊
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Thanks Surbhi…🙏🙏
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A sad place to be…
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Haha yup…🖖 Thanks for stopping by…🙏🙏
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Want and wanted, need and needed…funny how my brain read the last two lines as lemon drop. Nice work!
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Thanks so much…🙏🙏🙏
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Perfect drunken love story – all complete with yelled declarations of love, dreamy movements and all, concluding with the perfect hangover. And the featured pic is equally great 😀 a classic!
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Thanks so much Deb…🤜🤛…yeah, you’ve put it really well here…🙏🙏🙏
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So sweet. I feel like I get this, even though it’s not exactly spelled out.
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Yup, there wasn’t anything poetic to spell out Lia…only disheveled hair, sour burps, and incessant monologue from the other side… thanks for visiting…😀🤜🤛🙏🙏🏵️🍀
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Hahaha!!! That’s what I was imagining. Awesome Sundaram, you sound like a very sweet and gentlemanly guy. She was lucky. :)) 🙌🙏🌻💛
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You are such a sweet person yourself dear Lia. Thanks so much for always bringing a smile along. 🤜🤛🍀🙏🙏
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You really brought me a smile too. It’s tough sometimes, being the more sober warrior. ;))) Kudos to you. 🙌🤜💛🤛🙌
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The last four lines speak volumes. The tired intoxicated love.
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That’s nice ‘tired intoxicated love’, though it felt more like frustration…😀😀 Okay love it was…😁😁🤜🤛🍀🍀
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Haha.. frustrated tired intoxicated love 😉😁🤜🤛
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Ahaan!! So full of love, it is.😃
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I smell sarcasm there,…😀😁 How’re you doing, Chetna…🍀🍀
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Sarcasam, Really!! Share with me also.😂
I am doing fine. How about you??
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Oh I meant your comment, girl…( I call you that cause I imagine you to be at least 10 years younger to me 🍀)
I thought you were having fun when you said it was full of love 😁 cause I was damn frustrated thinking back on it…😁 I like being within my den, you know.
And I am good too…not the best at the moment, but good. Thanks…and keep inspired. 🤘🍀🙌🙌
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There’s something to be said for a nice cozy shell at the end of a long day. 😉 🤜🤛🌷
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You know it Ellie…🙌🙌 It’s heaven. Keep me there all day, and I won’t complain. 🖖🍀🖖
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😄 me too! 🙌🖖🍀
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Nice, Mr Sundaram.
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Thanks Shibaaa…🙏🙏
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I was asking about that only.😂
Well, I meant that. And I got you for this thing. 😂I also think of it as a challenge when it comes to sharing anything really personal. All that stuff about people being judgemental, you know. But sometimes it is worth it. And you don’t have to feel bad about it. We all are the same in one or the other way, ain’t we!
Not the best but good! I hope you come back to the former phase soon.
And yeah, how come you think that I am 10 years younger? Now I won’t be asking your age but I do have a guess for you to be somewhere in your late 20S or early 30S…maybe.😂
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Dear Chetna… late 20s is certainly the age I relate most to as a writer, for I had the best of times then, and I like to visit them often. But it’s a compliment if you think so. I am not much far off, but let it be a mystery 🤘🤘 I think knowing truths about others is so boring. I like to imagine it my way. Like, by the sound of you: conflicted but ambitious, mature yet youthful, I have a reality of my own about you. You might not be it at all, but we’re all so messed up, as you said, we are all the same. A varying combination of same old feelings and quirks.
Sorry I’m off the track. 😀🙏🙏
You know I once had a blog, one where I wrote all truths about me. And one day I deleted it all, ’cause they looked so ugly. And I dread telling truths now, without twisting them.
And now I am just rambling. But I know you wouldn’t mind it.
Take care Chetna…🍀🍀🙏
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Ahh! Let it be that way. I like it rather. To be free of any barriers of age or whatsoever. At least here.😃
Now, that is a news to me! It is a big decision. And saying that, I know you must have had your time to land at this.
I am all ears to your ramblings. They are interesting.
A man of truths without a twist. It sounds good naa.😅😅
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Oh, but I meant I like to twist them now, having seen what truth looks like on a page. Sorry, no more a man of truth I am. 🙂
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Lovely poem💙. I enjoyed reading it.
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Hey, this is a very nice poem. Also, I have nominated you for the lockdown tag! Hope you accept my nomination.
You can check the post here. https://lifedairyofadreamer.wordpress.com/2020/09/09/the-lockdown-tag/
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Thanks Aditi…🙏🙏…really appreciate the kind gesture. 🍀🍀
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So sad, but really nice to read.
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Haha…yeah..thanks. 🙏 it was fun to write.
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beautiful poem 🙂 🙂 love from Nepal
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Thanks so much for reading…
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A rollicking story from start to end
Its rhyme and rhythm did heartstrings bend
Light and dark shown in equal measure
The reality of life put in stanzas; so clever.
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Hey Hamish…thanks so much for such a beautiful comment. 🙏🤘🙏
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Incredibly beautiful
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Thanks so much.🙏
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Love it!
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Thanks so much 🙏
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Omg….this is soooo lovelyyy🌙🌙💕💕
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Thanks Akshita…,🙏,…appreciate the kind words.
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Your most welcome..!😊
It was a great pleasure reading ❤❤
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Beautifully penned.
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Thanks so much…🙏🙏
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F***! That hurt!!! But this could be an introvert…or a depressed human or someone really aware to never get entrapped in a snare.
There’s a beautiful song by MLTR that comes to my mind…Stuck in the heat of the night…
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Haha… yeah… something that came to mind when I did feel entrapped a bit. Thanks.
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