The Sun
fighting the chill
reaches down with its infinite arms
permeates my skin
and courses through my veins
intoxicating me.
My eyelids droop in response
as I feel
the cold retreating
the sounds receding
and all thoughts dwindling to a blackness
until
a rising tide of guilt
washes over me
and jolts me back to the shore.
I open my eyes, and get up.
‘Cause now is not the time
to slacken the grip
to go easy
to be pleased with myself.
Now is the time
to shake off this false weariness
this treacherous satisfaction
and keep walking.
For the world is
full of people
who think
they have done enough.
And someone up above
smiles sadly
for they had only just begun.
Sundaram Chauhan
Too much self-assuredness can lead to arrogance and apathy. Great poem.
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True…thanks for summing it up…π€π€π€
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I loved the writing! Rest assured, there’s always more. More we can do, other interests to indulge, and always striving to be the best we can!
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Put so well…thanks so much for stopping by…ππ
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What beautiful profound powerful truths you so delicately weaved – making me aware of the oceanic nature of my being, and how often I mistake myself to be this wave and that. The miraculous warmth of the true magic always seems only to be the beginning of how much there is to be revealed.
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Absolutely… Awesome is just the beginning…there is more to come…no stopping. Thanks for sharing your lovely words. Always soothing. πππππ
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Beautiful soothing poem πΌπΌπ€π€
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Thanks for the appreciation Astha…βΊπβΊ
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This is actually the sad truth of life…those who have a real zest for life leave too soon while those just surviving seem to live a long, unproductive and are even ungrateful for the gift of life given to them. Beautiful words as always Sundaram ππππ
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Your own words are so beautiful…ππ…thanks so much. πβΊοΈπ
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Brilliant beautiful poem Sundaram π
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Hey… thanks so much :))
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Oh Sundaram, you speak for all of humanity in this one..so easily to be lulled into not doing anything more..just sleep away into the sun’s rays, the warmth that lulls you to the living oblivion, even if it is just for a little while..If you know what you really should be doing..yes shake yourself back and do it and if you are still not sure..you can ask..that one who smile upstairs// that someone will let you know the better plan, inshallah.
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Beautiful description Karima…πβΊπ… it’s sometimes an effort to do the simplest of things. All we can do, at such times, is keep awake. The rest as you mentioned will dawn from above, from the already laid up plan for us. I’m trying to just be there to receive the directions. And moving along…ππΌπΈπ
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Inspirational and so true! The first sign of comfort after a bit of hardship can make many lull, and take it easy, and leave the track just as things are heating up. If we go another few paces instead, it’s the joy of achievement which carries us along. If we stop, we just stop!
Having said that, I love my siesta in the winter sun afternoon, whenever that is possible (was frequent as a child, not too many opportunities nowadays, but I grab any that comes along) π
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Wise words Deb…π€π€ And yeah I too like my siesta, π which has gone so elusive nowadays as you mentioned.
Thanks for reading my friend… ππ
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What a beautiful yet thought provoking poem. It is true that we can never be farsighted enough to understand the true intentions of The supreme Lord.
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True…never…even the efforts to understand are futile. We can only try to be there to receive the insight when it comes, and not feel down, and out. Thanks for stopping by. πβΊοΈπ
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A pleasure indeed dear dost! π
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“The woods are lovely, dark and deep,
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep”
Your poem reminded me of Robert Frost; the only poet I can quote since I was a teenager. Those lines are from my absolute favorite poem titled Stopping by the woods on a snowy evening…
I absolutely love the last line of your poem. It rings so true! We have all been there from time to time. Ready to drop out when the going gets too tough to comprehend. The wise and gritty amongst us hear the divine voice within us and realise that its a bend in the map of our Life. A halt to take a deep breath and keep walking. The rest fall away…deaf to their divinity and blind to its miracles and possibilities.
Your poem also reminds me of a poem I wrote. Its long. But its quite similar to your theme. Do check it out if I have the time. https://peepintomymemorypalace.wordpress.com/2019/01/20/case-of-the-lost-soulprint/
Lastly your poem also reminds me of a Kishore Kumar song…Ruk Jaana Nahin Tu Kahin Haar Ke…O Rahi, O Rahi….remember? Thats the link for the song incase you need a refresher. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dO7OKASr8lc
Did I mention I love your poem? I do. I got kinda lost in memories…but thats who I am!
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I just read your poem, and it was breathtakingly amazing. Left a comment there. And I love the song too. Thanks for sharing your honest words, dear. Always a pleasure. And you are your best when you take a plunge into your memories and bring out those pearls. Keep sharing. :))
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I promise I will keep diving into the ocean of my memories mon ami!
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Fact of life
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Thanks so much. :))
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Beautiful and full of inspiration. Actually we never realize our true worth and with time we lose our ambition and desire to go further. But as you said in the poem we must go on and fight and strive for what can make us and this world a better place. Loved this one.
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Thanks Yeshu… to keep walking is the aim… and we’ll all reach some place. It might not be the best one, but it still will be better than the one we are at now, and far ahead of it too. Complacency is stagnation. Inviting yet stinking. Thanks for stopping by. :))
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Agree. love your thoughts.
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Your writing.. is such a gift, Sundaram. β¨ππ¦
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Thanks so much dear Ellie…:)) Yours too…:))
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:))
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Have to keep pushing beyond what we think our limits are to achieve something great: what a wonderful examination of humanity and the psyche.
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Thanks Benjamin… yes we have no idea what our true limits are. The only way is to keep pushing forward, ignoring the ever so often interfering complacency.
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You’re welcome. I see what you mean. Complacency has many dangers to it.
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So evocative
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Appreciate the kind words…:))
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Reblogged this on Human Resources by Nnamtique and commented:
This is an awesome motivational poem by fellow WordPress author, Sundaram Chauhan. Enjoy.
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Thanks so much…ππ
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The skill is to know when is not the time to stop, when is the time to keep going, and how to use the time! A lovely poem
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Yes…thanks…it’s far too easy to stop than start, so that’s a skill worthy of cultivating…ππ:-)
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Once again I must say you write beautifully. The line breaks are at the perfect time for my brain to stop and think about what has come before and what might be coming next. It’s almost like if you started at any line in the poem and stopped at any other you could be reading an almost infinite number of different pieces.
Just. Keep. Starting. A very important message that I am thankful of the reminder to keep doing. ππ
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Thanks Hamish. π Yes. Wonderfully put. Just. Keep. Starting. That’s it. ,π€πͺπ€
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Truly insightful and inspiring words, let not the wave of being passive override the journey you are bound to take.
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Thanks so much for the encouraging words. π Glad to see you here. π:-)π
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Always a pleasure π
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